Thursday, January 19, 2012

Response to Emergency


This story was about two drug using and abusing hospital staff members who spend time together under the influence of unknown pills stolen from the hospital they both work in. Also the story chronicles a misadventure of a road trip they take to a fair. The first part of the story is starts off with the narrator being sober. While sober he seems to depict Georgie as a crazy person. The initial story line is about a knife wound patient who is treated by the lowly and high Georgie.  This piece uses excellent prose and the dialogue flows very effectively.  
                I’m not sure why the author utilized light font to break up the work but the piece is broken up into parts using that technique. I thought that aspect of the organization accomplished very little.
                Throughout the peace the narrator talks about Georgie more than himself. Georgie is portrayed as somewhat of a burn out and we can derive from that the narrator is as well because he associates so closely with him.
                The way the author describes everything is so fascinating and keeps me interested as a reader. He talks about the pills tasting the way urine smells. That imagery is amazingly thought provoking and disgusting.  He also uses very strong verbs to describe various actions “The talk just dropped off a cliff” that line really makes you understand how quickly the conversation ended.  The whole story is full of unique lines like this.
                Later on in the story the author discusses the rabbit incident and after finishing the whole story he admits he might be remembering it wrong. That is so significant because it shows that to him recollection is not that important or at least the details aren’t. This could be derived from his drug use or maybe it is a philosophical axiom he holds on to. What are important, however, are the concepts derived from the memory. The insignificance of memory and time is again shown in this line “The bunnies weren’t a problem yet, or they’d already been a problem and were already forgotten, and there was nothing on my mind.” The time line and possibly even the truth are not held as the most important aspects of his memory which is very telling.
                One more concept I found interesting was about the snow covered flowers at the drive in movie. The author describes the scene using the snow which usually obscures things as a revealing agent which I found interesting.
The story was an fascinating “a day in the life” piece and I think the voice was unique and honest which helped keep it interesting and worthy of reading.

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